Mirror+writing

Mirror Writing __** sea on a hot day with golden glitches nearing the black hole that is the pupil. His nose is thin and not too long, some light freckles can be seen from closer up. His lips are not so big or fat like raw sausages but they’re not so thin that it just looks ridiculous. His hair is a caramel blonde that shines brightly in the sunlight and has an under layer of chocolate blonde, his scruffy hair fits his face and body build completely. His face is a tanned piece of artwork with his cheek-bones sitting high in his face and poking out like they want to break out off his skin, he has a little bump on his fore head which people think is a bruise but is actually a unique part of his body that stands out if his light blonde fringe wasn’t there. His chin has a normal bone structure and does not sticking out anywhere. **
 * __ mirror writing 2nd draft
 * The young boy looking back at me looks familiar. He has eyes that shine like the
 * He was born in late 1995 and is now thirteen years old. He has had many bad and good adventures in live (**__//life//__**) including a clear memory of when he was annoying this girl in Belgium. He was harassing her by saying the same thing over and over again, she got a bit offended and kicked him like a horse on a bad day. He knocked his head on the side of a piece of furniture splitting his head open, hot blood gushing out. The ugly scar remains on his head to this day. He is very caring about his classmates and will happily help them, although he is not the type of person you want to mess with. He is calm when he wants to be but has the temper of a lion and gets very annoyed when he gets interrupted with his jobs like reading and watching TV.**
 * His ambitions in life are to become a historian, if that’s not meant to be, then he will rule the world with Wyn. He is diligent and loves school because he loves to meet new people and socialize.As he walks away from the mirror he thinks about what he will see next time he looks at the boy. **


 * By Bram**

//__Miss Crawford - Great work Bram! You have used 'his' alot in the first paragraph - what else could you use? Your name, for example. Your third paragraph is not as strong as the first and second - what can else can you add?__// //__Nice to know you love to come to school to learn :)__//

this is my final copy of my mirror writing :)


 * The young boy looking back at me looks familiar. He has eyes that shine like the sea on a hot day with golden glitches nearing the black hole that is the pupil. His nose is thin and not too long, some light freckles can be seen from closer up. Bram’s lips are not so big or fat like raw sausages but they’re not so thin that it just looks ridiculous. His hair is a Caramel blonde that shines brightly in the sunlight and has an under layer of Chocolate blonde, his scruffy hair fits his face and body build completely. Bram’s face is a Tanned piece of artwork with his cheek-bones sitting high in his face and poking out like they want to break out off his skin, he has a little bump on his fore head which people think is a bruise but is actually a unique part of his body that stands out if his light blonde fringe wasn’t there. His chin has a normal bone structure and does not sticking out anywhere. **
 * He was born in late 1995 and is now thirteen years old. He has had many bad and good adventures in life including a clear memory when he was annoying this girl in Belgium he was harassing her by saying the same thing over and over again, she got a bit offended and kicked him like a horse on a bad day, he knocked his head on the side of a piece of furniture splitting his head open, hot blood gushing out, the ugly scar remains on his head to this day. He is very caring about his classmates and will happily help them, although he is not the type of person you want to mess with, he is calm when he wants to be but has the temper of a lion and gets very annoyed when he gets interrupted with his jobs like reading and watching TV. **
 * His great ambitions in life are to become a historian because he loves facts about the area and is very strong in it, if that’s not meant to be then he will rule the world with Wyn because he likes leading his mates with care, but is also willing to lead. He is diligent and loves school because he loves to meet new people and socialize. As he walks away from the mirror he thinks about what he will see next time he looks at the boy. **
 * By Bram Brichau **